Editing Planning - Final Running Order for My Opening Sequence for 'When Duty Calls'

I will be editing shortly, so I have put together a final running order of my shots and title cards so that the editing process runs as smoothly as possible.

• Paramount Pictures ident
• TITLE CARD - PARAMOUNT PICTURES (production company)
• TITLE CARD - SKYDANCE MEDIA & MILLENNIUM FILMS (production companies)
• Medium close up of protagonist asleep 
• Close up of alarm clock - as it’s going off
• Medium close of protagonist waking up to alarm
• Close up of alarm clock as protagonist slaps it off
• Medium close up of protagonist as he goes back to snoozing 
• TITLE CARD - ETHAN HART (actor)
• Medium shot facing bed as protagonist sits up to get out of bed
• Ground level shot of feet hitting the floor
• Medium close up of protagonist's legs walking 
• TITLE CARD - RICHARD THORNE, SOPHIE PARKER (actors)
• Medium shot of protagonist stretching hands above head
• Close up on protagonist holding his lower back
• TITLE CARD - HANS ZIMMER (composer)
• Long shot of protagonist in toilet
• TITLE CARD - BILL POPE (cinematographer)

• Close up on protagonist's head coming into frame as he does press-ups
• Long shot of protagonist doing press-ups - side on
• TITLE CARD - LEE SMITH (editor)
• Close up on feet running on treadmill - ground level
• Close up on protagonist's face as he runs
• Medium close up of protagonist doing shoulder press - slight low angle
• TITLE CARD - CHRISTOPHER MCQUARRIE (screenplay by)

• Close up on burnt toast popping out of toaster
• Extreme close up of protagonist's face as he’s annoyed - same angle, camera flipped
• Close up on espresso shot spilling over the top
• Close up on protagonist, frustrated again
• TITLE CARD - KEVIN FIEGE, FRANK MARSHALL (producers)
• POV shot of protagonist opening draw and grabbing a knife
• Close up on protagonist spreading jam on toast
• Medium shot of protagonist sitting at table reading newspaper (see tops of eyes)
• TITLE CARD - David Leitch (director)
• Medium close up on Alexa “Breaking news from London”
• Medium shot of protagonist picking up toast to eat and focusing on radio as he says “Alexa, volume up”
• Close up on Alexa
• Close up on protagonist's face as he’s shocked

• Close up on phone as it buzzes “HEADQUARTERS - EMERGENCY ONLY”
• Close up on protagonist swiftly moving head towards phone - low angle
• Close up on phone ringing
• Close up on protagonist's anxious face as he lets the phone ring for a little - low angle
• Close up on phone as protagonist pulls phone out of frame
• Close up on protagonist's anxious face as he answers call and listens to caller as he finishes the opening sequence by saying “Yes Sir, I’m ready”
• Cut to black and title appears “WHEN DUTY CALLS”